許多烤鴨一說到寫作就頭疼，究其原因還是太年輕，沒有豐富的生活經驗，缺乏對人生的思考。小編懂你，來雅思寫作語料庫的懷抱，詳盡的名師思路拓展 + 原創語料，趕緊學起來，讓我們一起戰勝雅思寫作。本期探討寫作題：吃快餐有害健康，有人認為教育可以幫助人們改變這個不良習慣，有人認為教育不起作用，分別對兩種觀點進行討論。且看下文詳細分析。
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Scientists believe that eating fast food is harmful to one ’ s health. Some people think that education can help them change that bad habit. Others, however, argue that education does not work.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 科學傢認為吃快餐有害健康，有人認為教育可以幫助人們改變這個不良習慣，有人認為教育不起作用，討論兩種觀點。 ( 2010 年 12 月 11 日雅思考試題目 )
【名師點評】討論兩種觀點，可以使用第一人稱口吻，也可以使用第三人稱口吻。
【作傢立場】保障健康飲食，教育是起到一定的積極作用，但是，健康飲食不能僅僅依靠教育。
【思路拓展】
①青少年是快餐的主要消費者，快餐含有過多的糖分、脂肪、熱量，長期食用有害健康。所以，青少年應該成為教育的主體。
②為瞭減少快餐對於消費者的不良影響，除瞭教育以外，政府也該承擔責任。例如，美國政府已經限制肯德基捆綁銷售兒童套餐的商業行為。
【范文賞析】
【首段】背景介紹 + 作傢立場
So prevailing are the fast foods that some teenagers are in the habit eating junk foods nearly every week. From the perspective of some nutritionists, too much intake of sugar, calorie and fat is undoubtedly health-threatening, for fast food, in most cases, is low in nutritional value. People differ greatly in their views as to how to foster wholesome dietary habit. As I see it, educating the public about the dangers of unhealthy eating, regulating baneful sales and food advertisements to children and lowering the price of healthy foods should be used together to help people keep fit.
【二段】
Granted, one effective way to promote a healthy diet is to educate people about the potential risks of unhealthy diet. Modern people might opt for healthier meals and snacks if they are taught that fast foods are high in salt, fat and sugar. To illustrate, I myself changed my unwholesome eating habits after watching television programs on how to preserve health. Also, while it is of great significance to educate adult eater, schoolchildren should be main target for education because they are not only in their formative years but also the regular eaters of fast foods.
【三段】
In addition to education, other ways to promote healthy eating are not far to seek. First, methods should be adopted to strictly censor those junk food advertisement aiming at children. Meanwhile, bundle sale of children ’ meals by giving out gift toys ought to be banned. Virtually, American has already enacted relevant legislations to restrict such sale promotion of KFC and Mcdonald's. Also, it is imperative for the governments to ensure that healthy foods are cheaper so that people could afford to buy the wholesome foods. Imaginably，the decreased price of fresh fruits and vegetable could enable more people to enjoy healthier foods.
【尾段】
Overall, education could aid people to change bad eating habits. However, it also works to restrain the improper publicity and sale of fast food restaurant as well as lower the price of wholesome foods
【原創語料庫】
1. So prevailing are the fast foods that some children and youngsters are in the habit of eating fast foods nearly every week. 快餐是如此流行，以至於很多孩子或青少年現在有每周幾乎吃快餐的習慣。
【拓展】prevailing = prevalent = popular adj 流行的
2. wholesome = healthy = sound adj 健康的
3. junk foods n 垃圾食品
4. alter one ’ s dietary habit = change one ’ s eating habit v 改變一個人的飲食習慣
5. be detrimental to health = undermine one ’ s health v 有害健康
6. is a health-threatening practice v 有害健康的做法
7. be conducive to one ’ s health = conduce to one ’ s health = is beneficial to one ’ s health v 有益健康
8. keep fit = stay healthy v 保持健康
9. is low in nutritional value v 營養價值很低
10. contribute to obesity = give rise to= overweight = lead to fatness v 導致肥胖
11. bundle sale n 捆綁銷售
12. avoid too much intake of sugar, calorie and fat v 避免太多的糖分、脂肪、熱量的攝入
13. Healthy food should be made cheaper. 健康食品應價格低廉
14. The advertising of junk foods aiming at children should be reasonably regulated 針對兒童的垃圾食品廣告應該被合理規范
15. inspire encourage people to eat natural foods v 鼓勵人們吃天然食品
16. foster reasonable and regular dietary habit v 培養健康規律的飲食習慣
【拓展】foster = cultivate = develop v 培養
17. make people have a deeper insight into how to acquire balanced nutrition v 加深人們對於獲得均衡營養的洞察
18. It is imperative for the government to call on wholesome dietary habit. 號召健康飲食，對於政府而言勢在必行。
19. Personal importance should be attached to the sanitation of eating and drinking 個人應該重視飲食衛生。
20. On no account can we ignore the immense value of health management, no matter how busy we are. 無論我們多忙，我們不能忽視健康管理的巨大價值。
【拓展練筆題目】
People should look after their health as a duty to the society they live in rather than personal benefits. Do you agree or not agree? 保持健康是盡到瞭社會責任，不是對於個人有益，是否認同 ?
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