10 月 21 日的雅思考試已結束，現在為大傢帶來最新雅思真題原創高分范文，含詳情解析和語料。
| 大作文 | ||
| 類型 | 政府類 | |
| 題目
| Some people think governments should spend money on saving languages with fewer speakers from dying out completely. Others think this is a waste of financial resources. Discuss both these views and give your own opinions. | |
| 范文解析 | 這是一道 2011 年的舊題， | |
| 文章結構 | P1：引入話題 + 表明作者觀點，保護瀕危語言不是資源浪費 P2：對立觀點語言的消逝是一種自然的進程，將資金用在其他地方會更有實際意義 P3：語言不僅是為瞭交流，更承載瞭文化、知識和記憶，保護語言是保護文化多樣性 P4：語言更深層次的智慧 P5：總結重申作者觀點 | |
| 高分話題表達（范文中已用紅色標註） | teeter on the brink of extinction | 搖擺在滅絕的邊緣 |
| dying tongues | 滅絕的語言 | |
| subsidize | 資助 | |
| a money waster | 一個浪費錢的行為 | |
| be unstoppable artificially | 不能被人為地阻止 | |
| money-consuming | 消耗錢的 | |
| labor intensive | 勞動密集的 | |
| ineffective and intangible | 無效的和無形的 | |
| poverty alleviation | 扶貧 | |
| language revitalization | 語言復興 | |
| intertwined | 錯綜復雜的 | |
| simply put | 簡言之 | |
| revive a language | 復興語言 | |
| culture diversity | 文化多樣性 | |
| a wealth of wisdom | 很多的智慧 | |
| capitalize on | 利用 | |
| be committed to | 致力於 | |
| 雅思寫作原創范文 | The more successful a country was economically, the more rapidly its languages were being losing and for these reasons and others, hundreds of languages are teetering on the brink of extinction and even become unfortunately extinct ones. However, the investment in protecting and preserving those dying tongues is to some extent not wasteful but necessarily worthwhile for government. Compared with subsidizing the improvement of economy and education, funding the conservation of minority language appears to be a money waster. This is mainly because language death might be a natural part of the process of human cultural development and might be unstoppable artificially and because preventing it is not just money-consuming but labor intensive, an ineffective and intangible effort that may turn out to be meaningless. The money spent on unrewarding these activities, if invested in more significant undertakings such as poverty alleviation, AIDS combating, scientific research, etc., will be obviously beneficial to the general public and the whole society. But this is not that simple. Financing language revitalization, on the other hand, is of cultural significance indeed and thus does worth the governments ’ while. It is widely acknowledged that culture and language are undeniably intertwined and each language, more than just a means of communication, fully carries a unique culture and is the home of a nation ’ s mind, conveying the knowledge, thought and faith of its speakers. Simply put, when preserving and reviving a language even fewer people use, people protect the culture diversity and when losing a language, we lose a culture heritage. Not only does reviving endangered languages financially preserve cultural diversity but it empowers humans to promote and progress in all fields. Containing an accumulated body of scientific knowledge, including about geography, mathematics, navigation, astronomy, and many more, every language is a wealth of wisdom from which future generations can fully capitalize on to spark thoughts, to solve different puzzles and problems and more importantly to develop further. In other words, without languages, there will be no knowledge on which a society relies to prosper. Therefore，being committed to preserving their dying tongues by different resources not just by money is what each governments and individuals should do. To conclude, useless as it may seem, investing in minority language is beneficial to both culture and social cohesion rather than wasting money. 原創來自小站邢睿贏老師 | |
| 字數 | 388 words | |
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