2018 年 3 月 3 日場的雅思考試已經結束，為大傢帶來最新雅思寫作真題及多版本范文。本場雅思寫作小作文題目為：The following charts illustrate the information about players of electronic games in South Korea in 2003.Write a passage about the charts. 下面的圖表說明瞭 2003 年韓國電子遊戲玩傢的信息。寫一篇關於圖表的文章。
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大作文為社會類話題，題目為：In most countries, prison is the most common solution for the problem of crime. However, the more effective solution is to provide people with better education so that they do not become criminals.To what extent do you agree or disagree. 在大多數國傢，監獄是犯罪問題最常見的解決辦法。然而，更有效的解決辦法是為人們提供更好的教育，使他們不至於成為罪犯。在多大程度上你同意或不同意。
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范文版本 1：小站原創版
高分語段：There is no denying that prison serves as a deterring approach for potential offenders and can help to rehabilitate them. Many inmates have the opportunity to study while they are doing time, contributing to the fact that many never re-offend when they are released.
范文版本 2：唐老鴨 7 分范文
高分語段：Prison is certainly a place where criminals can be made to understand what wrong they have done to other people and why what they have done before is not socially acceptable. In this way, these criminals will have a better chance to come back to normal life. On top of the remedial function, prison can serve as a deterrent for those with an inclination to crime. The likelihood of losing freedom in prison can most effectively stop them from doing harms to the society and other individuals. 監獄當然是一個罪犯可以被用來理解他們對其他人做瞭什麼錯事的地方，為什麼他們以前做過的事情在社會上是不可接受的。通過這種方式，這些罪犯將有更大的機會回歸正常生活。除瞭補救功能，監獄還可以作為對犯罪傾向的威懾。在監獄中失去自由的可能性最有效地阻止瞭他們對社會和其他個人的傷害。
范文版本 3：雅思哥版高分范文
高分語段：There is no denying that sending lawbreakers to prison can contribute to maintaining public security and stability, especially for those who are convicted of grave crimes. After they are deprived of freedom, the criminals would reflect on their behavior and learn a lesson from it, which can effectively prevent them from committing crimes again. The punishment can also have deterrent effects on those potential criminals, who would consider the consequences of violating the law and give up their evil intentions. 不可否認的是，將違法者送進監獄有助於維護公共安全和穩定，尤其是那些被判犯有嚴重罪行的人。在他們被剝奪瞭自由之後，罪犯會反思他們的行為並從中吸取教訓，從而有效地防止他們再次犯罪。這種懲罰也會對那些潛在的犯罪分子產生威懾作用，他們會考慮違反法律的後果，並放棄他們的邪惡意圖。
范文版本 4：小站原創小作文
高分語段：
It is evidently shown that the vast majority of players ( 77% ) were under 35 years old, with those less than 18 years old and between 18 and 35 almost equally represented, constituting 38% and 39% respectively while less than a quarter of players were over 36 years old. Also striking to note is that males who occupied nearly three quarters tremendously outnumbered females with nearly 28%, roughly one third of their male counterparts.
很明顯，絕大多數的玩傢 ( 77% ) 年齡在 35 歲以下，年齡在 18 歲以下，18 歲到 35 歲之間的人幾乎都是相同的，分別占 38% 和 39%，而在 36 歲以上的玩傢中，這一比例還不到四分之一。同樣值得註意的是，男性占據瞭近 3/4 的比例，遠遠超過瞭女性，接近 28%，大約是男性的三分之一。
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